Wednesday, February 11, 2009
poem ( ups n downs )
THERE ARE TIMES WHEN PEOPLE GO THREW THEIR UPS AND DOWNS, WHY I SAY THAT IS BECAUSE ITS TRUE, EVEN THOUGH I DO LOVE YOU, THERE ARE TIMES WHEN PEOPLE LIE IN A RELATIONSHIP IS THAT BECAUSE THE LOVE IS BLIND OR JUST LIEING BECAUSE THEY TRIED, WELL I TRIED AND REALIZED THAT I LOST THE APPLE OF MY EYE, THERE ARE TIMES WHEN PEOPLE FIGHT EVEN THOUGH THAT AINT RIGHT, MESSING AROUND DOING CRAZY THINGS, GOD KNOW'S WHAT SHE THINKS, EVEN I KNO IM JUST A WAIST, BUT TO HER IM JUST A PLAY, LIKE SOMETHING SHE CAN TAKE AWAY, I FEEL THAT IM NOTHING TO HER ANYMORE BUT WISH I WAS SOMEONE SHE CAN ADORE, DAY BY DAY MY LOVE GETS STRONGER EVEN THOUGH SHE CANT HOLD ON ANY LONGER, BUT HEY THIS IS WHAT YOU CALL UPS AND DOWNS.
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2 comments:
Wow...This is...wow. People dont understand that relationships have their problems. Some people, as soon as they hit a little bump in the road they want to throw everything away. If a relationship is "perfect" its probably fake or those two people arent human.=] You really have a deep powerful way of expressing these feelings on one of the most hardest things in life to understand, love. Whoever this girl is that's inspiring these poems, should read these. Maybe she'll get a better understand about how you feel about her and the relationship you once had.I love reading your poems and can relate to alot of them. Cant wait to see more of your post<3
I agree with Sabrina. You captured some really interesting issues and emotions in this poem. I especially like the part where you ask if people lie because love is blind? Usually when people say "love is blind" they mean that they can't understand why THIS (attractive) person would love THAT (unattractive) person. But you twisted the word around in a cool way. You seem to be saying that people lie because they're blind to what they have.
Anyhow, keep it up! Like Sabrina, I always look forward to reading your poems.
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